How is this bit of writing?

I have to agree, it is a little over descriptive. Also, mention the other bot at leats once... we didn't even know he was there until the second-last sentence. And you say 'Andrew' too often. I know when you're writing you feel the need to say the characters names often, in case people forget who you are talking about, but when you reread it you notice that the name is in there too much. Try and replace some of the 'Andrews' with other words.